"The new employee, John, was very nervous on his first day of work. He had never worked in an office before and was unsure of what to expect. As he walked through the door, he was greeted by his new boss, who showed him to his desk and introduced him to the rest of the team. John was relieved to find that everyone was friendly and welcoming, and he quickly settled into his new role. Despite his nerves, he was excited to start his new job and learn as much as he could."
Rewritten text:
John's first day at his new job was a nervous one. He had never worked in an office before and wasn't sure what to expect. As he walked through the door, his boss greeted him warmly and showed him to his desk. John was relieved to find that the rest of the team was friendly and welcoming, and he quickly settled into his new role. Despite his initial nerves, he was excited to start his new job and learn as much as possible.
